Kia ora Benny. You have certainly made satellites sound very important, great images, too. Imagine having no T.V., radios or phones! How difficult that would be in our modern world. However, I wonder what life would be like if we'd never had the technology to create all these things. I also read your Easter story. You obviously enjoyed creating your new world in that game. Something for next time, Benny: read your work over carefully and think about where sentences start and finish.
Hello and thanks for that comment. Next time I will read my work a few times, I remember not even looking at my work. When I imagine a world with no satellites I think of it as maybe the late eighteen hundreds.
Kia ora Benny. You have certainly made satellites sound very important, great images, too. Imagine having no T.V., radios or phones! How difficult that would be in our modern world. However, I wonder what life would be like if we'd never had the technology to create all these things.
ReplyDeleteI also read your Easter story. You obviously enjoyed creating your new world in that game. Something for next time, Benny: read your work over carefully and think about where sentences start and finish.
Hello and thanks for that comment. Next time I will read my work a few times, I remember not even looking at my work. When I imagine a world with no satellites I think of it as maybe the late eighteen hundreds.
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