Tēnā koe Benny. Well done for using your writing skills to share your learning about the pōwhiri process. You needed some support to get your ideas sorted for this work so next time make sure you are listening carefully when we are talking about a topic and learning about it as a class.
Your work was well presented and organised into paragraphs. Next you could work on using some more complex punctuation. Well done.
Kia Ora Benny. Beautifully presented work. The Powhiri process is amazing and must be such a special and memorable experience. Well done
ReplyDeleteTēnā koe Benny. Well done for using your writing skills to share your learning about the pōwhiri process. You needed some support to get your ideas sorted for this work so next time make sure you are listening carefully when we are talking about a topic and learning about it as a class.
ReplyDeleteYour work was well presented and organised into paragraphs. Next you could work on using some more complex punctuation. Well done.